
Script Writing
Coming Home to the Missing
Marissa Craig
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INT. HOUSE - BASEMENT - LATE AFTERNOON
A lavender envelope adorned with flower stickers falls to the floor. A man shifts through sheets of college ruled paper. Scoffs. Folds them closed. Stares blankly.
MAN
She’s a terrible liar...
He whips around. Bare feet lightly dusting the cement floor.
MAN
...isn’t she?
Slowly paces. Dry feet shuffling.
MAN
But these letters aren’t for me.
(amused)
I don’t even live here.
A soft whimper behind him. Stops pacing. Glances back over his shoulder. The whimpering ceases.
MAN
She’s lost. Doesn’t know who she
is anymore.
Cranes his neck to scratch his prickly jaw.
MAN
Doesn’t recognize the world she’s
trapped in or the voice she hears
in her head. Moving away from home
unearths a lot of things.
More whimpering. Soft moans. Begging. Crying. The man sighs. Turns around. Storms towards the woman tied to a chair with layers of rope, twine, ribbon and pantyhose. Her legs spread open, wrapped around a chair leg.
MAN
What!
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He unravels the gag around her mouth.
BOUND WOMAN
(crying)
Please, let me go.
MAN
You’re the one who said you wanted
to have a good time. So I share my
feelings with you. Try to discuss
the existential crisis hidden in
this young woman’s letters—-
BOUND WOMAN
Please—-
He groans. Snatches the knife from the table beside the woman. She screams. He covers her mouth. Holds her in place with vacant eyes. Doorbell rings.
MAN
Hm?
He stares at the ceiling, listening. His hand slowly falls from the woman’s mouth. Knife tip taps her heaving heart. Doorbell rings again. The woman screams.
The man’s eyes leave the ceiling. Raises an eye brow, questionably. Tightens his grip on the knife.
BOUND WOMAN
Help me! Please!
His brow furrows. Enraged.
EXT. HOUSE - FRONT YARD - MOMENTS EARLIER
Young woman, MIRA, steps off a bus. Struggles to get a large suitcase off the last step. Bus pulls away. She walks gingerly and quickly; her suitcase bumping against her calf, impeding her balance.
Darkened clouds follow her down the street. A water droplet splashes her nose.
She stops at a house. Tall grass. Unkempt shrubs. Wilted mums. Bird droppings on the sedan.
She quickens her pace. Drops her suitcase in the driveway. Peers inside the grubby, blue sedan.
Walks to the front door. Kicks newspapers off the path. Knocks calmly.
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MIRA
Tricia?
Pushes a shrub aside to locate the doorbell. Presses it once.
MIRA
(to self)
Please, be okay. Why won’t you
answer the phone?
Nervous and paranoid. Checks behind her. Knocks vigorously. Rings doorbell a second time. Kneels to peer through the mail slot.
MIRA
Tricia, answer me. Mom?
Heavy rainfall. She runs to retrieve her suitcase. Eyes on the ground, exhaling with each tiny step back to the front door. Drops suitcase. Deeply exhales as she raises her eyes. Stumbles back.
MIRA
(surprised)
Oh?
A man stands in the doorway. Black, sleeveless undershirt and gray sweatpants. Barefoot. Mira looks him up and down. Attempts to look pass him into the shadowy house interior.
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MIRA
You are? I mean...I’m Mira. Tricia’s my step-mother.
The man is silent. He observes her troubled face. Glances into the sky to gauge the looming storm.
MIRA
(frantic)
Is she okay? Is she in there?
(suspicious)
Who are you?
The man looks down at her worn suitcase adorned with flower stickers and marker drawings of cats.
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MIRA
Emilio?
The man nods.
MIRA
Emilio? Really? I...
He grabs her suitcase with ease.
EMILIO
It’s about to storm.
Emilio caries her suitcase inside the house. Mira looks back. Shudders from the rumbling overhead. She enters the house and closes the door.
INT. HOUSE - LIVING ROOM
Emilio drops her suitcase near the couch. Watches Mira intently as she surveys the front of the house. With her back turned, he tilts his ear to the basement door.
MIRA
Emilio, where’s Tricia? I’ve been
calling, leaving messages, mailing
letters. Is she okay?
His eyes trail away from her.
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EMILIO
She’s fine. She’s just...away.
MIRA
She left and didn’t tell anyone?
EMILIO
Um...Yeah.
Mira relaxes her shoulders. Peels off her jacket and lays it across the chair. Sinks into the couch.
MIRA
I guess she tells you
everything. I was so worried.
Emilio keeps his eyes on her as he sits on the other end of the couch. His knees press tightly together. His hands interlock on his lap.
MIRA
Sorry I beat the door down. I’ve
been trying to reach her for
weeks. I thought she was ignoring
me--but that’s not like her--so
then I thought...something bad had
happened.
EMILIO
You’re here to check on her?
MIRA
Yeah.
She fluffs her hair. Emilio’s fingers tighten.
MIRA
Well...It’s kinda funny. I think
this is the first time we’ve ever
met.
She turns to him.
MIRA
When my dad married your mom, you
were already out of the
house. When you visited, I was
away at boarding school or at my
grandma’s.
She reaches her hand out to him.
MIRA
What I mean to say is...Hi.
Emilio stares at her hand. He slowly takes it then flinches at her enthusiastic shake.
MIRA
It’s nice to finally meet you.
Alarmed by a red spot on his pants, he quickly yanks his hand away and rises. Turns his back to her. Covers his crotch with his hand.
EMILIO
I have to finish some things in the
basement. We’ll talk later.
MIRA
Oh? Um...
He speeds away. Slams the basement door behind him.
MIRA
...okay.
Mira stands. Continues to survey the house. Touches the plant by the front door. Feels the soil. Dry. Peers through the blinds into the front yard.
MIRA
This isn’t like you. Why not tell
the neighbor to toss out your
paper? Why didn’t you arrange to
have the grass cut?
She steps back from the blinds.
MIRA
Why haven’t you called
me...wherever you are?
Mira brushes her fingers against the dusty dining room table. She wipes her fingers on her pants before picking up the cordless phone. Blunt dial tone. Places the phone back on the receiver.
She lingers over the answering machine’s flashing, red light. Tentatively presses the play button.
ANSWERING MACHINE (V.O.)
First message. Tuesday. October
sixth—-
MIRA
No.
She skips the message.
ANSWERING MACHINE (V.O.)
Second message. Thursday. October
eighth...
Mira leans down to listen.
MIRA (V.O.)
Hi, Tricia. It’s Mira. Hope
everything is well. Everything is
well here. College is fun--
Skips to the next message. Listens intently.
MIRA (V.O.)
Hey, Tricia. Mira...again. We need to talk.
(whimpering)
I really messed up. Something bad has—-
ANSWERING MACHINE (V.O.)
Message erased.
She rubs her forehead, deleting the following messages.
EMILIO
Having a hard time at school?
She quickly turns around. Emilio stands at the far end of the dining room table. His shirt and pants slightly different than what he wore earlier.
EMILIO
I guess you’ll be wanting to get
rid the letters too.
MIRA
You saw the letters?
EMILIO
There’s no need to be ashamed—-
MIRA
You opened them? Why!
EMILIO
We can keep it a secret.
She steps closer. Nails digging into her palm.
MIRA
You had no right to open them.
EMILIO
You wrote them to Tricia but they
weren’t meant for her.
She shakes her head in disbelief. Turns away from him and flicks a tear from her eye. Emilio focuses on her trembling hands.
A boom of thunder. She gasps. He smiles.
Mira looks ahead at a framed school portrait of a young boy. Bronze skin, brown hair, a mole under his eye. She squints, rolls her eyes around. Struggles to recall. She turns back to Emilio walking away from her.
MIRA
Wait. I didn’t mean to yell.
EMILIO
When you feel lost, it’s natural to want to come
home and reconnect with the person you once were.
But sometimes the wrong person is waiting for you.
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She attempts to speak, then pauses. Contemplating his words.
EMILIO
I’m sorry Tricia--M-Mom--isn’t here.
MIRA
You call her Tricia too?
EMILIO
She left some papers out about a trip.
A cruise, I think. I misplaced them
so you’ll have to take my word for it.
He moves towards the basement door. Lingers on the door frame, intrigued by Mira’s step forward.
MIRA
You...You really understood what I
was trying to say in the letters?
You know about feeling...lost?
She steps closer to him.
EMILIO
I do. It’s refreshing to have
someone admit it.
MIRA
Is there...an escape?
EMILIO
(amused)
Escape?
MIRA
Sounds weak. Like I’m giving
up, or don’t wanna face my feelings.
EMILIO
Choosing to escape instead of
fighting through it isn’t weak. An
escape is simply a way out.
He steps down into the basement.
MIRA
What are you doing down there?
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EMILIO
Tidying up.
He closes the door behind him.
MIRA
This is not how I expected our
first meeting.
Mira drags her suitcase across the floor into her bedroom. As the sky groans, she closes herself inside.
INT. HOUSE - TRICIA’S BEDROOM – NIGHT
Mira enters Tricia’s bedroom. Checks behind her before closing the door. Flips through papers on the desk.
Picks up a small photo frame containing Mira’s high school portrait. Places it down and picks up another photo frame containing the same picture from the dining room: the young boy with the mole under his eye.
MIRA
Nothing recent.
She returns the photo.
MIRA
He’s so much different than what
you said. Supposed to be friendly,
not weird and cryptic...and nosy.
She looks up to the calendar. The current week is bare.
She drops her hand on an address book. Flips through the pages and lands on Emilio’s name. Sits on Tricia’s bed. Address book in one hand. Cordless phone in the other.
Mumbles the numbers as she dials.
MIRA
What if he picks up? What if he
picks up? Oh, goodness.
MAN (V.O.)
Hello?
MIRA
Uh...Em...Emilio?
Thunder booms. Mira holds her breath.
MAN (V.O.)
Yeah.
Mira expels a stifled gasp.
MIRA
(frightened)
Em-Em-Emilio?
MAN (V.O.)
Yeah. Oh, no. This is Harry. Emilio’s not here.
Relieved, she exhales fully.
MIRA
Who’s Harry?
HARRY (V.O.)
His roommate. Who’s this?
MIRA
I’m Mira, his step-sister.
HARRY (V.O.)
Didn’t know he had one of
those. He’s not here. Left,
maybe, two weeks ago. Trip with
his girlfriend, I think.
MIRA
He’s not house sitting for his mom?
HARRY (V.O.)
Doubt it. They don’t get along.
MIRA
(shocked)
They don’t?
HARRY (V.O.)
Nah. Sorry, I can’t talk long.
Thunder booms. Closer. Louder.
MIRA
One more thing. What’s Emilio
look like?
HARRY
So you’re not his sister.
MIRA
I am. But--
The lights turn off.
MIRA
Hello? Harry?
No dial tone. She stands, crosses the room, flips the light switch. Opens Tricia’s bedroom door and peers into the darkness.
MIRA
Emilio? Are you okay?
Mira guides her hands along the walls to the basement door. Fumbles with the handle before opening it.
MIRA
Hey! Can you hear me?
INT. HOUSE – BASEMENT
Mira steps cautiously into the basement. Her foot taps each stair before she slides down, gripping the banister with both hands. Stairs creak.
MIRA
If you’re okay, say something.
Her shoulders tense, stepping onto the cold, cement floor. Shuffles along with her hand brushing the grainy walls. She leaves the perimeter and walks into the middle of the room. Hands sweeping in front of her. Tender steps.
Stumbles into a chair. A brief screech. Wood clacking to the floor. Reaches her hand down and pulls back.
She shakes the mysterious fluid from her hand. It remains. Brings it close to her face to smell it. She gasps. Kneels down to the floor. Feels around the area. Slapping. Grasping.
Plants her knees and crawls. More mysterious liquid pooling underneath her fingernails.
MIRA
Emilio, answer me?
(to self)
Oh, god—-
EMILIO
Your last letter...
Mira flips around to face his voice. Loses her balance. Mysterious liquid soaking into her pajama shorts. The backs of her thighs wet and sticky.
EMILIO
...the lavender one. You mentioned
wanting the voices to stop. You
said, you don’t wanna punish
yourself but it feels right to.
She sweeps her hand in front of her. Presses against Emilio’s chest.
MIRA
We should head upstairs. It’s too
dark.
EMILIO
You said the dark was comforting.
MIRA
I don’t want to talk about the
letter. I want to go
upstairs. What...What’s going on
down here? Are you painting?
Her elbow bends as he moves closer. She scoots away.
EMILIO
The voice inside your head doesn’t
sound like you anymore. You’re not
sure who it is. Did it just emerge
or was it always there?
She scoots away. He advances on his hands and knees, creeping lazily towards her in the void.
EMILIO
Did you really think Tricia could
help you?
MIRA
Mom?
EMILIO
Mom. Tricia. Whatever. She can’t
help you.
MIRA
What did you do to her? What is
this?
She holds her soiled hand out to him. His fingers interlock with hers.
EMILIO
Those girls hurt you.
She yanks her hand away. He pulls it closer to him and places her palm on his chest.
EMILIO
You weren’t weak. They weren’t right.
MIRA
Let go of me.
EMILIO
You don’t deserve the punishment.
MIRA
Stop.
EMILIO
If you want to feel better...if you
want that cruel, demanding voice in
your head to stop...you have to
hurt others--the ones who deserve it.
MIRA
No.
EMILIO
It’s telling you to hurt others,
not yourself.
He releases her hand. She grazes his prickly neck, outlining his jaw. Her fingers inch up his face. Circles his cheekbone. Floats to the other side. Pats one finger on his cheek. He seizes her hand.
EMILIO
I told you the way through, but if
you’d rather have the escape, I can
help you with that too.
He hugs her close. Her head resting on his chest. Her body snuggling inside his open legs. She whimpers. He combs through her hair with his fingers.
MIRA
You’re not Emilio, are you?
He continues to comb through her hair with blood-stained fingers. Content.
INT. HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - NEXT MORNING
Front door opens. Slams against the wall and swings closed. Front door opens. A tall, voluptuous, cheetah-cloaked woman backs in with two suitcases. Tosses them to the floor. Her backside props the door open. Tosses in two more suitcases.
Door closes. The woman, TRICIA, kicks off her sandals and plops down on an armchair. Stretches over to an end table to turn on a lamp.
A small respite before standing. Wobbles to the dining room. Yawns.
TRICIA
Hm?
She hovers over the answer machine. No red, blinking light. She presses the play button.
ANSWERING MACHINE (V.O.)
First message. Tuesday. October
sixth. 10:10 A.M.
Dead air. She reaches for the skip button. Heavy breathing through the speaker. She pulls her hand away.
EMILIO (V.O.)
(sobbing)
Tricia...Mom? I...
Tricia sits down in a chair. Covers her mouth. On the recording, Emilio clears his throat.
EMILIO (V.O.)
(stern)
...I’m not...I’m not weak
anymore. You don’t have to worry
about me. I know a way
through. It works.
A small creak from the basement stairs.
EMILIO (V.O.)
These voices--my voices--they used
to say I wasn’t good enough. Now
they say I’m strong.
TRICIA
(anxious)
Emilio.
EMILIO (V.O.)
I don’t deserve to be punished. I
don’t deserve to walk around...
walk around with all this hate.
I’m not the problem.
The basement door opens.
EMILIO (V.O.)
I feel free now. The look in
their eyes when they beg me to
stop...it’s...freeing. Empowering. If
they could somehow live again and
remember what I’ve done, they’d
never hurt another person again.
Tricia shakes her head.
EMILIO (V.O.)
Maybe they will remember. And
remember me. Thank me.
Tricia turns to the basement door. Stands.
EMILIO (V.O.)
I didn’t mean to call, I just
wanted to speak. I’ll come see
you, so you can see the real
me. Bye.
ANSWERING MACHINE (V.O.)
End of message.
TRICIA
What are you doing here?
Emilio stands in the living room. Blood trickling down his hands, loosening his grip on the knife. A hand print stamped over his face, below the mole under his left eye.
ANSWERING MACHINE (V.O.)
Second message. Thursday. October
eighth—-
TRICIA
What have you done?
MIRA (V.O.)
Hi, Tricia. It’s Mira. Hope
everything is well. Everything is
well here—
TRICIA
What have you done! Answer me!
Emilio carefully leaves the knife on the coffee table.
EMILIO
She wanted to escape.
MIRA (V.O.)
--over the break we can have a
family dinner. Hopefully Emilio
can make it. I really want to
meet—-
TRICIA
Who are you talking about? Escape what?
He sits on the couch. Plops his hand beside him. Opens it. Gazes to the other side. Smiles.
MIRA (V.O.)
--Anyway. Love you. See you soon.
ANSWERING MACHINE (V.O.)
End of message.